very well put together, very easy read. makes you wonder about your own relatives.you have a great talent for writing. I read it and found that I wasnt lazy with the read through. to many times writer put too much on descriptive text and not enough on the story itself. I like your style keep it up look forward to seeing your evolution.
Well said it gives me the feel of anger. hot pointed curt and acidic you have done very well with this one
continue your writing by all means I await more of your soul with baited breath
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