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Review by wanderinjase Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
I love the sincerity of your message. Flowed well. You do not need to rhyme to create poetry. I would like to see more of your message, without the restrictions of rhythm.
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Review by wanderinjase Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your heart is in this piece, that much is evident. Emotions is striking, and heart-felt. My only criticism is that it seemed you felt the need to rhyme. Poetry doesn't need to rhyme, especially if it interferes with the writer's message. I felt that you may have been "pigeon-holing" yourself to the rhyme, rather than the message. Which, the message being the most powerful and striking point. Overall, your verse is awesome. I'm sorry for the loss of your father. I am currently caring for my elderly father-who, ironically, is married to the sea. God bless.
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