Oh, brings back memories...:) I think everyone has had that moment in their life, and it's a really good inspiration to create such a beautiful poem..Good job!
I have wrote a few poems myself. I hope you could take the time to read and review. I would really appreciate it if you could give me some suggestions for improvement...:) thanks!
Short but sweet..:) I think the length actually made it better.. The impact of the message was magnified with the few words you chose to use. I can also feel the emotion behind each word, it almost feels like I'm watching a clip from a movie..Thumbs up! Good luck on your future work.
I am also new here and i hope you could take the time to review my work. I would really appreciate if you would check it out..:)
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