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Review by Sammy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A fantastic poem, it flows wonderfully well. There is something off about the second two lines of the first stanza that I can not quite put my finger on.
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Review of wearing my body  Open in new Window.
Review by Sammy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The poem flows beautifully which although it seems ironic is hard to do with the stream of consciousness style. I would perhaps change some words you use peacch twice there are better words for describing skin colour, but its not that much an issue. Good poem well done.
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Review by Sammy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A fantastic poem
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Review of Live to Die  Open in new Window.
Review by Sammy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a beautifully brutal poem its straight to the point. I love the use of antipathetical pairings a technique which Keats was fond of. Overall the poem has a very blood sweat toil and tears feel which I am absolutely here for.


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Review by Sammy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an excellently written poem. I love the structure and rhythm.

Keep on writing!
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Review of I'm Not Done Yet  Open in new Window.
Review by Sammy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Just wow you poem is so deep and emotional. And so well structured. I loved it.
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