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Review of Inspiration  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (4.0)
wonderful and most interesting thought process of s poetic mind juggling with ideas and night's dreams.the discomfort of the haunted midnight is rewarded by cheerful muse.
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Review of Shattered Minds  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
the poet has dealt mental agony in most sensitive manner and last lines become a musical cry.
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Review of Snowflake  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Jack was being reasonable,Sarah was getting impetuous,but her end was tragic she did have very little time.Very interesting narration.
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Review of Everyone poops  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (4.0)
could poop song be so amusing and poetic.the poet deserves complete appreciation for honest and truthful presentation of a topic mostly not talked about,very realistic picture of stages of life.
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Review of Magnolia  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (3.5)
this is short and sweet poetic wonder.magnolias become the symbol of life and cycle of nature,winter can not loom large over our heads soon it will be replaced by spring.
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Review by soothingtouch
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is every daughter's soul cry who has seen her mother pass away.indeed living with her among the clouds someday is very touching.simplicity is the beauty of this poem and love for mother is the fabric of this poem.
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Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (5.0)
congrats.what a remarkable journey of inner voice of the young man from dungeons of greed to warmth of realization.it is worthwhile to watch this transition,the writer indeed is a great teacher and he must have enriched his real life students in the same manner.
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Review by soothingtouch
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A wonderful short-story woven at different levels.writer has managed to captivate the readers attention throughout.the story begins with a sword game between a father and son,then there are pictures of honest adventures of two siblings in the nearby jungle and their escape from a flying machine.
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Review of A beam of light  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (4.5)
wonderful realization of hard fact of life. that beam of light is hidden for a moment,it goes nowhere.all the apprehensions and fears are gone when confidence surfaces.ignorance vanishes,veil of darkness is lifted,it is light,it is knowledge.
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Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (4.0)
Definitely an inspirational story of an honest and sincere friend out there to comfort his sad and gloomy partner.he trying to be cheerful by recollecting fun moments of their childhood.he seems very convincing to say that they can relive the happier time again.he is read to be the strong support her life.
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Review of The Train Home  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
very interesting read.this wonderful description has weave of a great story.any one can connect to events that take place on the train journey.karina is rightfully worried about the end of the story.every solution lies within a person only that applies for conclusion of the book as well.
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Review of Oak  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (5.0)
congrats!what a lovely and simple nature story.i fell in love with the narrative.the description states facts of plant life in most poetic manner that it becomes a beautiful melody.i wish i could read it on and on.
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Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem with vivid and vibrant imagery.this poem appeals to all six senses.summer and spring can be anything but cruel and taunting.the charming use of poetic tools lends the poem a wonderful vibrancy.time to come out and enjoy the warmth light and cheerful sounds.
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Review of The Mirror  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (3.0)
so true for anybody and everybody.his whole life man tries to hide his true self fearing that he won't be understood.mirror on the wall is true to him.the writer is concealing himself from the world,he has locked himself deep within.when the writer sees the mirror he realizes how artificial he is.the mirror can see in him a scared child and a worried youth wanting to sing.
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Review by soothingtouch
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
this makes very interesting short story.two brothers share a strange sort of bond young brother is pained at his older sibling's addiction.he really wants that his brother should stop drinking,but ironically he is not available when he is needed most. his bitterness, laziness and ignorance cost him the separation of three persons he loved most.
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Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is extremely heart touching realistic story of miseries of old age stranded on the streets.i would like to congratulate the writer for such a gripping narrative. the author has succeeded in presenting a demented old woman who recollects her past and present on a railway plat-form and tries to share it with a poor young boy.


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Review of TE AMO  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
true love never dies,it is eternal song of the soul.poet here emphasises that wordly felicitations are meaningless to him now he is completely satiated.
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Review of Cling to Life  
Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (4.0)
beautiful words woven together to make life speak.
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Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hilarious and amusing for sure.benefits of forgetfulness are many .beneficiaries are the persons in the habit of borrowing money from others and then conveniently forgetting to pay back.here the lender will have a traumatic climb on the mountain of life .
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Review by soothingtouch
Rated: E | (3.0)
interesting and gripping story.will mother really succeed in saving her son?
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