Long live RAM! I think Paul is one of your most colorful character's even though he is a truck, we just won't tell him that. I love it when she screams at the "thing" and "it" screams back. I must admit, for a while I did not know what CNN was, possibly until know. I'm a caveman. This chapter was an excellent balance of description and humor but still gives the reader a chilling fright! This is defiantly going on my fan's list.
I really enjoyed this and it's such a pretty observation. The part with the birds was somewhat amusing, I have never really thought of them that way. Funny how poetry can change a person’s outlook on things such as the weather and the way animals view themselves. The best part of winter is the natural beauty and that’s conveyed very well in this piece.
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