Hi jrolla420:
Since this is my first review I want to say please WRITE ON! This was a good story set forth in a very readable manner. There was just enough spice in it to keep the reader interested and the characters were believable. I found myself reading a little faster to find out the ending but I was a little disappointed when I arrived there.
I will not offer any advice because I'm having trouble ending a couple of short stories myself. Nevertheless, both of us will forge ahead. HAPPY WRITING.
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