i like this. when will you finish? are you finished already? is this all?
anyway, you should, maybe, explain better how and why jude and you heroine broke it off. also, to me at least, your characters are sort of flat. what i mean to say is that they are not very realistic. maybe im wrong on this, this is one of my problems when writing, and im just projecting my own problems to your writing.
nevertheless, the story is good. i want to know what happens to jude and summer and your heroine (i dont think you ever said her name.)
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