By some odd stream of coincidence, it usually came to pass at the precise hour that a pleasant buzz morphed itself into it’s evil twin “the Hang-over” hangover is one word.
I was hoping that something other than tequila, orange juice might prepare my stomach for the day ahead. This sentence doesn't make a lot of sense to me... the use of the comma, or tequila, or orange juice...? I don't know. I suggest re-wording this.
The station reps including the deejay are here now. I believe that this should just be 'D.J.'.
That's an awesome anecdote!! I'm so glad that you wrote it down to share!!
A little smile a little laugh, food falling off your chin Usually I don't make a big deal about punctuation in poetry, but since you've used it normally in the rest of the poem, this should be "A little smile, a little laugh"
The line in the last stanza has a different rhythm to it than the rest of the poem... Just a thought.
A very cute poem. All in all, a great read. Thanks for sharing. WRITE ON!!
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