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Review of Utopia  Open in new Window.
Review by Kreacher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Such nice poem!
A utopia, indeed. Wish this would happen in real life.
Wish a man could live without relying on things such as money.
Where one could live without problems and anger and jealousy!
Great poem!

Keep writing and inspire everyone! God bless!

Kreacher.
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Review of Left Alone  Open in new Window.
Review by Kreacher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
I'm not so much into rhymed words and all but this one is really nice!
One could really feel how deep the author's love is.
How inlove he is to whoever this poem is addressed to.
Though, it is not always healthy to be have so much of everything.
That's my opinion.
Great poem!
And great writer! Great mind!
Keep writing!
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Review by Kreacher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great story!
Sort of Dan Brown's book mixed with history and fantasy!
Makes you wonder what will happen next, though only for a short time because of the fast transition of the story.
Story is well-organized.
Despite the fast transition, it still is understandable. Leaves no gap.
Creative mind!
Keep writing!


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Review of Questions.  Open in new Window.
Review by Kreacher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
There are plenty of questions to ask in this world. Yet, not everything could be answered right away. But the good thing is that, there is God whom we could rely and trust when everyone and everything leaves us.
Nice piece.
Makes you wander and ask the world.
Makes you think a little more.
It is sometimes healthy to ask questions, isn't it?
Great piece!
Keep writing!


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Review of About MEN  Open in new Window.
Review by Kreacher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I don't like to pretend that I know men that much.
But will it really be that so much of a shame if you show even a little of your feminine side?
Is it too much to ask?
And is it really all about sex and beer and pizza for men now?
I mean, it would be too shallow if it is only all about that, right?
Nevertheless, I find this one interesting!
Keep writing for us to know more about you guys!


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Review by Kreacher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is too realistic.
Really!
I have known many seafarers in my life, and some of them told me that some things like what you have stated in that story happen.
It really is nice to read something of this sort.
Though, I'm not sure if everything is true. I was only told of little things like seniors sleeping with girls and the sorts.

And by the way, it would be nicer if you correct the typographical errors so it won't be too confusing.
Keep writing!


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Review of Apart  Open in new Window.
Review by Kreacher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Such a sad piece!
I can feel every emotion this piece intends to deliver!
Too emotional.
Sadness is overwhelming!
And so is love.
It touched me in some ways.
I hope it is not for you.
But if it is, I hope you'd be able to pull yourself together.
Keep writing.
Art and poetry keep one's sanity intact, sometimes.


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Review of Sad Magic  Open in new Window.
Review by Kreacher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really hope you'd go back there. Keep writing!
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Review of Frustration  Open in new Window.
Review by Kreacher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can deeply relate to this poem. It really is terrible to not being able to help. I hope you are doing well!
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