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Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautifully written! I absolutely love it.

My favorite part has to be:
"the spirit is an ever flowing stream of learning"

What a unique way to view spirit...GREAT JOB!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed the poem very much. Great rhythm.

"Dreams dance unfettered
in the sultry night
enchanted by a princess pillow
and a matching light."

This is my favorite part of the poem. It was a great start to the poem. It is important to catch the reader in the very beginning which I think you did perfectly..


Thanks for sharing!

~I_AM
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