Nice story. Good idea on creating the idea that perhaps Ezekiel stole the shawl instead of the bug-man but not exactly telling us straight out which keeps us just guessing. However, I realized that at the beginning you called him Glen but then it changed to Greg?
Nicely done. Good story and a creative response to the prompt. I was hooked on the story from the very beginning to the end. I liked your descriptions. You did a very good job in introducing the characters. I enjoyed reading it. :) Congrats on the win.
Spot on review. I absolutely loved the Avengers. Not a huge superhero action type movie person. I've only seen the Hulk and Spiderman but this movie hooked me. I encourage everyone I know to see it and I've watched it twice. Downey Jr. was ,of course, my favorite throughout the show.
Beautiful. I love your descriptions. This was a very creative and intriguing response to the prompt. You did a really good job with writing this piece. There were no problems that I found within the story. It had me hooked from start to finish. Congrats on your win. :) Again, good job.
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