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Rated: E | (4.0)
hahaha very funny. I was wondering where this was going untill the end. way to keep the suspense. I'd edit the parenthesis here to say:(The treadmill's in the garage facing the street. I seem accomplish more this way.) Just a technicality. By the way, personally, I find the Atkins diet to be unnaturally unhealthy. I mean,you are seriously cutting out one major food group so of course you'll lose weight. But at what cost? Just an opinion. Keep up your jogging. Aim for a ten minute mile (if this isn't entirely fictional).
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