I really like this poem. It describes something so seemingly horrendous with such a casual ease, which leads me to believe that this is exactly what appeases the racing mind of someone who can be such a monster. The tone seems controlled as well, exposing a level of mature and comprehensive experience with such an emotional issue. Good composure, the set-up seems like cold steel - I enjoyed this moment in time. I'm no expert, and in fact am learning the in's and out's of poetry myself, so I'm not the biggest help with constructive criticism, but liked what I read.
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