Beautifully written piece. Flows really well and the descriptive prose works really well. What I have taken from it is that this woman is in the grip of some kind of mental breakdown and she is on a journey to kill herself. I hope I am right in this equation?? As it adds a lot more meaning to the finished article.
Good read, some very harrowing images were conjured up. I really liked the way her existence came full circle and she had turned into what she had initially despised. My only negative was that toward the end it seemed a bit rushed and felt the opportunity to develop the story further was slightly wasted. This said the writing was excellent and the idea, while disturbing at times, is a good one. Thanks for sharing!!!
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