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Review of Klingon Hailing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
nod doesn't rime facade.
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Review of Loving A Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
stress pattern wrong in line 3.
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Review of Darkness Floods  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wrong stress pattern in second line.
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Review of A Frozen Winter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
perfect rhyming scheme. good figures , good flow.
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Review of The Teacher  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
heart and departs , not rhyme.grow and whole, not rhyme . it is a good poem , however
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Review of Grief  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Ache should have been a small letter.Memory should be followed by comma, and "it" started with small letter. Until should be in small letter.
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Review of You Terrify Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
good flow of metaphors, in fact it flows like St.ifa!
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Artificial untruth is pleonasmus. the work is good ;it flows like Chase.
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Review of Come Here Lucas  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
good start. tooshort
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Review of Telling Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
fair. master metres. check my portfolio
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Review of dove of peace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
you always flow. do other members of wdc flow like this. you are great
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Review of blooming leader  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
what a leader! blooming in iambic metaphors like some sweet flower petal.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
this poem is as fine as "Twinkle Twinkle Little star"
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
the president and his ogbia and ijaw groups have been pirates across centuries. may he fail the forth-coming election for the grater good of nigerians
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Review of sonnets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
if a nigerian can write this, we need not fear shakespeare
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Review of idea rush  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
only shakespeare can match this flow. excellent work
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