\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/homewrecker702
Review Requests: OFF
1 Public Reviews Given
8 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of The Heir  Open in new Window.
Review by homewrecker702 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I like the story. It was easy to read and with only one grammatical error, actually just an ommission of the word "he" , "I didn't know left it to me" is how it reads now. I didn't gather too much hidden meaning in the story, although I sense it is there, underlying the whole plot. Like an inside joke to yourself of someone you know. Maybe a dream? I know I would love to have that sort of thing happen to me, although losing someone is tough, even though she doesn't care at all.
Please read my 6 short poems and return the favor!!!
Homewrecker702
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/homewrecker702