The stories in this interactive are all extremely well written and very detailed, not only good weight gain stories, hut interesting reads as well. It's amazing to see just how dedicated people are to continuing a story with this. I am very excited to see where this goes next.
The stories in this interactive are all extremely well written and very detailed, not only good weight gain stories, hut interesting reads as well. It's amazing to see just how dedicated people are to continuing a story with this. I am very excited to see where this goes next.
The stories in this interactive are all extremely well written and very detailed, not only good weight gain stories, hut interesting reads as well. It's amazing to see just how dedicated people are to continuing a story with this. I am very excited to see where this goes next.
The stories in this interactive are all extremely well written and very detailed, not only good weight gain stories, hut interesting reads as well. It's amazing to see just how dedicated people are to continuing a story with this. I am very excited to see where this goes next. 5/5
The concept of the story is pretty interesting, two kids fall in love and want the best for each other, and the tie to another story is even better:props for that. But I just can't really feel and connect with the story. Most stories I read on her I feel some kind of connection with, but I just don't with this. Don't take that as a bad thing though, all the writing in this is great, I guess this just isn't for me.
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