I loved this!
It's so playful and fun. Not to mention, quite funny!
Interesting idea about fruits and loved the rhyme and whim of the whole poem. The last line was great and had a very classic-punchline feel to it.
Just, why the caps lock? haha,
but this was fantastic. Thank you for sharing!
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