This is excellent work IOW! I gather from the age of your characters that you may be a younger writer. I could be wrong in this assessment, but if this happens to be true then you evidently have skills beyond your tender age. My own experience with writing has shown me that a writer will only develop such a sophisticated style with practice, and you have evidently had a lot of this. Of course you may be an older writer depicting teenage characters in which case your style may not be so surprising.
In any case I enjoyed reading it, and look forward to reading more of your work.
Mike.
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