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Rated: E | (5.0)
oh wow! that is a cool poem!!! The only thing I might suggest is that in the third stansa, you used but in the start of both the 2nd and fourth lines, and if you read it out loud, it sounds kind of weird. Overall, an awesome poem!!!!!!

All the best to you,
mystery
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow! i think that was great! I was so glad to find out that Paula changed in the end! wow again! I also really liked how she explained about the characters. that was cool! *Smile*
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