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Review by Heather Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Lovely. This filled me with love and gave me hope that one day i find some one to hold my hand through life.
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Review by Heather Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This made me laugh.. i really feel like chicken now ;) i think if you re-word some parts "never given thus to give in" for instance it will run a lot smoother. Apart from that its great! I like reading something light and energetic for a change. Looking forward to reading more of your pieces. :)
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Review of The Death of Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Heather Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your strength in your writing gives you a certain power. Very descriptive. I enjoyed reading this piece.
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Review of Pleading carrot  Open in new Window.
Review by Heather Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You have a great imagination.
I do feel in some parts of the story it didn't flow as well and was hard to follow.
But other than that it was really good.
Keep up the good work. :)
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Review of Your Intense Kiss  Open in new Window.
Review by Heather Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
I like how you express your desires but i think that some of your wording needs tweaking.
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