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Review by HDC
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yep!

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Review of Enchanted Wonders  
Review by HDC
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautifully written, thanks for sharing.
I enjoyed reading this piece.
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Review by HDC
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi DB, Great story. I enjoyed it, There's no feeling quite like watching your children learn and grow.

Also Welcome to the writing.com neighborhood.

Write on! :)
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Review of Forever Dark  
Review by HDC
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Nicely done
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Review of Waiting  
Review by HDC
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well done, I like it.. :)
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Review by HDC
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a pleasure to read, it flows nicely.
Well done.:)
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Review by HDC
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen.
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Review of blue  
Review by HDC
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was beautiful to read. it flows nicely, and the rhythm and rhymes make it easy to read.... well done..:)

I've always associated "Blue" with sadness.
and "Green" with envy.

"I'm so sick of missing you
shades of green are all I see
wheres the blue you gave to me?"...

This part is interesting to me. "Blue" as love, or maybe lost love causing a feeling of envy for whoever is getting the love now....Or something like that..:)

I hope I didn't misinterpret your work.

anyway, it makes you think.. Well done!
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Review of Summertime  
Review by HDC
Rated: E | (4.0)
well done, it was a pleasure to read.
Thanks for sharing.
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Review by HDC
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well done, I enjoyed reading this one.
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Review of The Soda  
Review by HDC
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a pleasure to read. It flows nicely.

Well done! :)
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Review by HDC
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written, and a pleasure to read.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

Write on. :)
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Review by HDC
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
"Kilts may be seen. Don't take a peek! Behave!"

:).. Love this part, it made me laugh.. :)

Well done, it was a pleasure to read.
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Review of All the Time  
Review by HDC
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen.
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Review of The Caring Soul  
Review by HDC
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful story, I have no doubt that no matter what this world throws at us, the hearts and souls of good people will see us through with love for our neighbors and hope for the future.

Thanks for sharing this story..:)
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Review of I Love The Rain  
Review by HDC
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written, It flows nicely, and was a pleasure to read.
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Review of Real Fool  
Review by HDC
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well done sir, I like it.
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Review of The Moment  
Review by HDC
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Realcav,This was a well written, and insightful description of an oh so familiar filling we have all experienced at some point in our lives.

Well done sir, well done.
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Review by HDC
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Neighbor, That was beautiful to read.

I have lived in the country and the city, and I will pick the county every time.

I want to thank you for welcoming me to this community with your kind reviews of my poems.

So here is a "sweet hello" from me to you.
I wish you the best in all that you do.
May your soul stay happy and your heart stay true.
And may you always have time to enjoy the view.
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