This is so beautiful! I wanted to cry when I finished reading this. I love this so much. Keep writing girl, because wow! I love the fact that this poem is so relatable. You did a wonderful job at making the reader feel emotional while reading this. *sniffle* *sniffle* Keep up the good work!!
This is a beautiful story. I love the way you personified the animals and I absolutely loved your word choice! You are a fantastic writer, and your way of describing everything that happened was amazing. I had a passion for all of the characters, especially the llama. Wonderful job.
I love this so much! It was a fabulous story and I felt intrigued 100% of the time. A tip for improvement would be to maybe work on your grammar a bit. Add some commas, work on any run on sentences. But overall, wonderful job!
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