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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like this alot. I want to read more already. Excellent start on the story. I would suggest maybe giving a tad bit more detail on their last trip to the spot. Like when Jen gets poison ivy. That part was a little confusing. But i like the story. I like the plot so far. Keep going! Good Luck!
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