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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Kind of to quick. Needs more detail. Should be Slowed down alot. Need to use enviroments better. The choices are slim and less detailed. needs more character development. Better writing of lines. Needs more relationship development. Have them actually emjoy themselfs better.
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