"Your eyes tell a story" - I think it should be 'tells'.
In the second stanza, I feel that you shouldn't use the phrase "those times" together in the 2 lines. Maybe you can change "those times" in the second line to: "Or when you softly wept."
The fact that you have the same lines for the first and last stanzas gives readers a sense of urgency and it emphasises the importance of those lines.
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