halfwright's (halfwright) Reviews

halfwright

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33 Public Reviews Given

75 Total Reviews Given

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#1711340

Review of Fairy Pond

Review by halfwright

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Wonderful word pictures!!

My favorite
Overhead, flocks of migrating birds, colors like mini explosions in the clear blue sky, head to where Winter’s icy touch cannot reach.

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#1541141

Review of Curiosity Killed the Cat

Review by halfwright

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

Well told story. I believed every word.

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#1514445

Review of The Day I Died

Review by halfwright

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Good descriptions and word pictures.

But then the wind began to softly echo my name.
well done line!

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#1499274

Review of Gourmet dining by rail

Review by halfwright

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Well done!

Great desciptions and interesting personal touches.

It does make me want to take the trip.

Youy could easily use it as an advertising brochure for the train. (or is it already?)

5

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#1475950

Review of How to Look Like a Moron When Skiing

Review by halfwright

Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

I am sure you have heard about the people who die doing what they love--- skiing into trees at 60 miles an hour. How can you love that? Nice story- well done dialogue.

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#1471404

Review of Take One! Fasten Your Safety Belts!

Review by halfwright

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I am impressed with your vocabulary and choice of words. You sound well educated and genteel without sounding stuffy. I always wanted to see Austrlia and might make it in my next life. Enjoyed the story

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#1461954

Review of Remember when

Review by halfwright

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Very well done and truthful to the point of pain. Great Story.
My favotite part:
(God bless the person who made it legal to tie up my children!)

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#1449258

Review of The Grim Weeper

Review by halfwright

Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)

Good dialogue,good descriptions. great twist on the ending, Well done Story

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#1441012

Review of The Something Under My Bed

Review by halfwright

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Interesting story. I enjoyed it because it is the first one I have read about such a long term relationship with the monster under your bed. Enjoyable and well done.

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#1435788

Review of Sleeping Beauty

Review by halfwright

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A nice start desperatly in need of an ending. What happened next? Surely you could tell more.

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#1432792

Review of The Six O'clock Automobile

Review by halfwright

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Well done story. The emotions Luis felt are very well descibed. The ending jumps up and slaps you in the face. Good job.

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#1432048

Review of Forbidden Delicacies

Review by halfwright

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

You entered into an insane mind with great skill. The way you have expressed the thought process is uncanny.

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#1141072

Review of Zen and the Art of Bathing Your Baby

Review by halfwright

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Good
Funny

I wish I could be as wordy as you. I think my stuff is too short.

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#1111268

Review of Last Visit to Mother

Review by halfwright

Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

Good images and descriptions.

2 questions.
Why was the electicity still on, after a year? If I am a week late with the payment, I get nasty letters.

What type of whiskey burns? Even 100 proof is still half water.