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Rated: E | (3.5)
Good, relatable poem. Wish it was a little longer with a little more detail though.
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Review of Depth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Really good, wish it was a little longer but the woring was good,
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Review of The Clean Up  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Really good and an ironic ending. Nice imagry/wording.
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Review of The Ice Lake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This story was very good. it had great imagry and amazing wording/Vocabulary!
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Review of Marriage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this because its so true and understab=ndable. Everyone should understand that getting married isn't just about saying "I Do" and that it's about much more than that...
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Review of Trapped  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a good short story. It is very emorional and brings chills. Very good imagery as well
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Review of Life and death  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the tone of this poem and the word choicing is really good.
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Review of Perspective  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This poem was kind of confusing to me...The world isn't flat and the sky isn't red. So that confused me a lot... And what's a mojave????
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Review of Death  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This poem was soooo good and so very true! I can't say there was one part I didn't like. If I had to choose, I would have to say the line I disliked the most was "That is why I cry" I feel as if you just wanted to rhyme and didnt really put any thought into the meaning.
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Review of My Grandma  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This poem is good because it brings out emotion in people and makes them think of their loved ones.
The only part i didnt like was the "I love you peanut" part. It was a little too personal on what your nannie used to call you. Other than that it was good.
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Review of Good Vs. Evil  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I LOVE YOUR POEM
It sounds so dark and mysterious.
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Review of Stay  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I like this poem. My favorite part was "Forever is a day longing for tomorrow" I thought that the last few lines were very catchy. One thing I didn't like was the same line at the end of every stanza.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem because it's very relatible. Every girl will go through this in her life at least once. The only thing I didn't like about this poem was the face that it was so predictable and everyone says these things.
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Review of Selfless Bastard  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's a wonderful poem, i love the fact that you seperated the main descriptions of age.
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