Hi Miranda: Sorry I gave you a three but that's because I'm not sure if you made all those spelling mistakes on purpose or not. If you did it on pupose, it's not funny and I would give you a zero. But, if you are a really bad speller that's OK because so am I. My suggestion would be to use "WORD" first the copy and paste. GOOD LUCK!
You want me to be both honest and respectful....and encouraging. Well, maybe I'm all wet here but there is nothing funny or exhilarating in your story. I mean if it is some type of Scottish dialect, I'm sure it must be the bomb. But, I'm telling you from a avid American reader that story is completely disjointed, uncomprehendible and has no meaning. I have no idea what you are trying to do so I do not know how to help.
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