I really like this. In fact it is one of the best pieces of poetry I've seen on this platform for a long time.I don't have many gift points so I've just sent you 100.
This is interesting. I think that it might have been better if it had been riming and the bit about the nappy at the end was quite random. Overall I think that your writing is quite good. In fact it is supercalafrolisticly good. Keep up the amazing work.
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