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Review by Jef E. Pop
Rated: E | (4.0)
I stumbled upon this and gave a read. It was completely ridiculous and i like it! I it doesnt take itself seriously and i like how you use the most absurd circumstances to craft this tale of love LOL. It is entertaining. If you want me to be critical of the writing i guess i would suggest some more descriptive adjectives. I have no mentel image of what mary looked like, same with the zombie. be sure to check your spelling of course...is the dog named buzzed or buzz?
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