GrisYeti75's (grisyeti75) Reviews

GrisYeti75

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#3485042

Review of It's In The Cellar

Review by GrisYeti75

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Dang! This is a very chilling story, very good job of setting the mood and dragging me into the slowly mounting terror of the unknown in the basement.
Color me impressed, and this is going into my favorites
Great use of vocabulary
Thanks for sharing this incredible story

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#3484990

Review of Growing up in front of the TV

Review by GrisYeti75

Rated: E

| (5.0)

So true, I abhor the garbage on the tv nowadays.
So well put, and I'm all about TOS myself, and Kotter, WKRP, and my all time fave - Andy Griffith

Thanks for sharing this lament to days gone by

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#3484840

Review of Ode to a city

Review by GrisYeti75

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Haunting, I love it

Personally, i"d only change one thing, on the first line of text, I would put Shadows at the starts of the sentence, to read" Shadows in the night" to me it just flows easier that way, but that's just my preference,

A very nice piece, thanks for sharing!

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#3484458

Review of The man on the Bench

Review by GrisYeti75

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Awesome idea for a story, I like it!
Only reason I didn't give it a 5 was due to some grammar errors and other minor things that could easily be fixed.

At any rate, thanks so much for sharing this very good idea!!

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#3484295

Review of Night in a Small Town

Review by GrisYeti75

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Just beautiful, I'm gonna leave it short and sweet.

Into the favorites it goes

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#3483843

Review of Grandpa, Tell Me

Review by GrisYeti75

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This is incredible, and so well done!!
Brilliant the way you make the songs an actual part of the conversation
What exactly is written with the prompt mean?

Again, awesome job

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#3483146

Review of Five Bucks

Review by GrisYeti75

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This was awesome! Great job of melting through different perspectives

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#3483120

Review of outback

Review by GrisYeti75

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Phenominal! All I could say when I finished was WOW! This is so well constructed. Awesome job, I have no critiques, just praise.
Thanks for sharing