Dang! This is a very chilling story, very good job of setting the mood and dragging me into the slowly mounting terror of the unknown in the basement.
Color me impressed, and this is going into my favorites
Great use of vocabulary
Thanks for sharing this incredible story
Personally, i"d only change one thing, on the first line of text, I would put Shadows at the starts of the sentence, to read" Shadows in the night" to me it just flows easier that way, but that's just my preference,
Awesome idea for a story, I like it!
Only reason I didn't give it a 5 was due to some grammar errors and other minor things that could easily be fixed.
At any rate, thanks so much for sharing this very good idea!!
This is incredible, and so well done!!
Brilliant the way you make the songs an actual part of the conversation
What exactly is written with the prompt mean?
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