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Review of The Triangle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a really good poem. I loved the concept of the poem and how you used.... there is a certain literary term for it, which i forget, but its where you say, "sweet scent
of sunlight" and "my listening eyes". That was well done. The only part I had problem with was the flow. I may just not have seen it, but just for consideration. Great imagery all around, did a fantastic job with describing the colors of everything. Again, good poem. :)
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