yay!! they're gonna meet!
Awesome story! i was hooked to it beginning to end. the mystery in the beginning. slowly you begin rooting for the guy. But why did it have to end? i thought we should be given a reason. Out of the blue she calls again. Nevertheless, its a wonderful story. The characters are not defined. We have no idea what kind of people they are. Only thing i could figure out was Ru cared about his work and that was the first time he did not.
Its so sweet! They spend nights talking. They talk 5 hours continuously. then again she calls back! The beginning grabs attention, The end leaves one craving for more.
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