Your story was really cute. I have two awesome nephews who are 7 and 9 that love their video games. I could see this happening to them. I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for posting it. Keep up the good work.
I was one of those people who jumped in too quickly. I have changed though. I have my best guard up now. I am tired of being hurt. Your little story is very touching. Thank you for posting. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for sharing your short story. It was really good. But I am wondering what she did to be expelled. I did enjoy it other wise. Keep up the good work.
Very nice poem. I really enjoyed it. It captured me from the start and I got lost in it. I hope you do not mind but I would like to share this with my nephew. He will absolutely love it. Thank you for posting and sharing it. Keep up the good work.
JJDel
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