I loved this story. Didn't want it to end. Reminds me of old goosebumps or Are you afraid of the dark. the way the dialogue comes in quick bursts near the beginning and middle is great. Really puts you in an uneasy frame while reading it, wondering what will happen next.
This is a very wonderful story. The use of detail is astounding. So many things blending together to bring the entire scene into the readers head. Simple items turn into beautiful treasures with just a few words added to their description. I really enjoyed reading this.
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