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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is one of the better stories I've read. I really like the parts with Emily in them. I love the whole, "guy shrunken, found my best friend who happens to be a girl," thing. And because of that I've got just one tiny suggestion. I think it'd be a good idea to continue the part of the story where Suzy is ready to torture Ant, but then Emily tells her to get out of her house. I'd kinda like to continue from there and I might add a little too.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is one of the best stories I've ever read on this website! Excellent! Excellent!! Excellent!!! Keep writing!
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