This can be well be a poem than an article. It has all that it needs in this article for being a poem. The author has written in a linguistic style. The personification has worked out well.
Regards gobind.gopal
There is a possibility of thrilling aspect in this story. The start is good. But i personally think that the author should work out on things like "Beth eyes was full of disappointment - like a kid whose toy was broken" to a better simile. But all the very best for the coming chapter. Looking forward to it.
The character given here, Maya, sounds original and it seems as though it's the author's story. But this article misses many things as, plot, theme, twist, climax, which could have thrilled the readers.
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