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Review of The Golden Pool  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is fantastic! The name Mordon alone seems to be an allusion to Myrddin, the Celtic source for Merlin. I want to see more from you, sir. :)
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Review of Too Much To Ask  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ooh, historical poetry. I like it. May I?


The tyler was released,
Wat was his name,
Strangely in charge as the peasants revolted.

Not peace but a sword between brothers of men;
For years excommunication broke bonds between them.
An Europe were strained and at war for its soul,
The Church made the case to maintain control.

Should man rule himself and devolve into anarchy?
Should a king not be a king and govern his own affairs?
Heads would roll whichever path one took,
For broad and spacious is the way leading to destruction,
And narrow is the way leading to salvation.
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