A vivid insight into the male mind especaily those that are dominant and prone to violence. As a psychology major I see the potentail here for a problem in a relationship if this is written from a first person. Perspective. Having been in one of those relationships myself I would advise you to get out immeditally.
This was almost like i was in the classroom with these students. it chilled me to the core .the detail you used was true to life as if you've been around this sort of inncedient before. I have handled weapons my whole life and they are to be treated with respect. I hope your stroy reachs someone who mighht consider doing this and they reconsider
This story was wonderful it touched all five of the senses and i was only reading but i felt like i was right there experincing the same feeling and senses this young woman was at the time she was enjoying her special gift from a valentines admirer. keep writing i like your style
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