I highly enjoyed this poem. Only one main critique: “I see it’s the wind playing a game” and “So I’ll live my life and know I’m not alone.” Are contradicting. Instead, you could relate the wind to reminding the writer that although his wife isn’t there physically, she’s with him spiritually. A positive comment was that this poem was very engaging, and is well written and nice to read.
I enjoyed this one! I agree with your main point here: creative contests can be designed to stunt creativity itself. Restrictions and writing don’t often mix. Anyways, nice work.
There is a powerful message underneath this piece. I enjoyed reading this, and suggest only that you consider elaborating on some of your points. Again, powerful idea here that needs some adjustments.
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