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Review by readingsamurai98 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
when i first read it... it was great. but then when i stopped to read the actual thing... i was shocked, we are making a kid who's 11 having sex with a 9 year old, wtf! i mean i get they're timeless monster's and all but still, were portraying a 9 year old with an 11 year old having sex in the shower., this has wrong written all over it. i gt that Allen wanted to get jr to go there, but he should've made him and Winnie older. but the story after words is great
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Review by readingsamurai98 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
to be honest this is too short and the stories are too few in story but it could be good if we add more to the story
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