This is indeed a wonderful description of how one experienced the rituals after death. The author has explained both in a poetic and humorous style how the man got in coffin and showed no sign of life. He was taken almost as dead by all. His sudden revival is not really pleasant to the onlookers but they get a shock to see him out of the coffin as if they had seen a ghost.
This is a moral story. The author describes in story form what a good father means. It will not suffice to ignore the current relation and spend All time and energy just on earning supposedly for son or family. It is no wisdom wasting present for the sake of future.
The article is thought provoking. the author correctly states that mere glancing through the social sites without active participation is a wate of time. As there is a difference between meaningful conversations and idle gossip just to while away time, there are useless chatting and time wastage on net also.
The author has rightly pointed out the similarities between humans. No doubt, a scientis and a murderer have same genetic qualities. what differentiates is social contribution. A scientis has contributed whereas murderer has broken law. That is the difference.
We often remember those who have faded from our life. The poem is well written and rhymed. This is about memories of friends and others with whom the poet had contact. He fondly remembers and cherishes their memory. He highly evaluates the days spent in the past with the friends who are lost in the big world for ever.
A very interesting mini shor story. Tere is some suspense. This is a dreadful narration of venture into dense forest where sure death awaits the human venturer. The wanderer finds some fur like livng creature. This creates awe and fearful suspense. The creature is nobody other than a squirrel. A beautiful description.
The story idea is very fantasic and interesting. As the work is under construction, I wish the author a grand successin completion of the item. The outline of the story itself is indicative of fantassy and adult content. The story would be very interesting and no one would resist reading at one stretch.
The poem is a very beautiful expression of a loving father who feels a sense of parting and losing when his grown up daughter seeks alliance with youth of her age. She is to get a boy and marry him. This is natural. The father knows well. But he is overwhelmed with sadness and feelong of losing her to a youth.
This is poem how a beautiful lady invited by the poet is seduced. He welcomes her and shows courtesy by taking her coat and offering her claret in the adjoining room. Both are physically overwhelmed by irresistible lust. While they are in compromising position, they hear voices coming nearer. The lady is aroused. They reach their climax. Thus they enter in a relation that is dirty secret which is theme of the poem. The poem is well worded and is rhyming. .
Gay or lesbian marriage is an affair between two individuals of the same gender and has no social significance and as such needs no recognotion and can not be recognised. However, such copuples should not be harassed or put to any disadvantage and should be afforded all benefits and rights of a citizen.
This is a big world and a single relation should not affect whole life of any one. This is very unwise to be overwhelmingly affected by break up of single relation and affect everything else. A single swallow does not make summer. Similarly a single individual is not so significant in an ndividual's life. This is a very interesting and useful poll
Life is not a bed of roses. No pains no gains. When you wish to gain knowledge, achieve something- you must take pain. you have to exert your brain and body whenever you do something. This is what flogging means to the author. Thinking, working, observing - all these activities cause some physical or mental tension, which is termed flogging. Such flogging is essential to the very functioning of society. All men, women, animals, trees are flogging in this sense The writing makes good reading. .
The piece is a remarkable word portrayal of slave condition. The slaves captured in africa were taken to distant lands. They were tied together and had to move together. they were treated worse than animals. even sickly were not spared. In the story, one old slave has broken his leg but no mercy. All slaves are line up and the master orders flogging. The flogging is so severe that the slaves' bodies bleed. Adam - main character of the story has fond memory of beloved eve in Africa. He sings slowly. The song is about his bondage and no chance of freedom until death. her hopes to be free and live together with Eve in after death life. This is a very pathetic story.
The poet is compulsive masochist. Whatever gives pain or saddens is cherished by him. He does not want to forget the painful things and thoughts at any time. When alone, he just thinks of the things that hurt. He does not wish to be alone. He desires his companion to be with him for giving him torture physically or mentally any way. The poem is well composed and beautifully expresses the psyche of a masochist.
I read what interests me and then write review as I feel correct. I seldom bother about the status or skill of the author. I am interested in the piece of writing than the author. It is very possible that the author is more brilliant and talented. But this occurs everywhere. The voters may be very less capable than the candidates in an election, yet they vote. Mwembers of interview board may be less talented than the interviewee and yet they interview. When I am on the writing.com, I have right to read and review any item howsoever talented the author may be. This is a good useful and interesting poll.
This is a beautiful long poem written in first person of a housewife who is married to a sadistic husband. She describes in detail the environment of the house and the instruments of torture used on her. The mater of the house is all clad in black. Black is sign of authority and suits a dominant and sadistic person. He has a whip to use on her. She loves the environment and the sadistic beating.
Men and women are equal and there is no reason why destitute women may receive greater attention. Barring the few, every adult male and female is capable of something and there is no need for support by any organization. The destitute and orpnaed children definitely need support and should be given priority
This piece depicts complete submission of the female (eve) before the male (adam). She describes very beautifully how devoted she is to him. This is natural instinct that gives satisfaction to every eve in submission to he adam. The piece is prose but the content and style is that of verse. This is good and pleasurable reading from beginning to end.
A man needs money to live well as well as to help others. Other matters are not so relevant. There is not much point in running after fame. This is sufficient if you are not ill famed and respected among the smaller number of known circle. A famous person cannot move so easily without being notices and as such he has restricted liberty. It is best to be moderately rich and lead an honest life without bothering about fame.
Being in advanced age, I may not be eligible for donating organ. However, I am in favor of organ donation when some one's life can be spared and the donor is not very adversely affected. There can be no grounds other than medical or health for denying organ donation. There is some misconception in Hindu religion. The Hindus believe in rebirth. It is belief of many that if any organ is donated, the person will take rebirth without that organ. Hence an eye donor will be born without eye. This is a useful poll.
Fantasy enables us to create a world of our own. It is our sole discretion to create what gives us pleasure. It will be indeed sad to fantasize ugly, dreadful and sad things. Let us create in our mind beautiful things that give us joy. There is nothing like winged fairies to give us ultimate pleasure and fun. This is a nice imaginative poll.
Giantess stories are really very exciting. I wonder how we would live with giantess in reality. A giantess is after all a woman. I wonder where from she would get big size clothes, cosmetics, food items etc. If I wanted to talk to her, I would have to use a microphone or reach er by ladder to whisper in her ears. I wonder where she can be housed and where she would sleep. Sex is the spice of life. A giantess would need a giant as her mate and any normal size man may be her food but not mate. The giantess stories are good only for imagination. This is an imaginative and joyous poll.
If you cannot believe in words of a guy and cannot be sure of what he will do to you or whether you can rely on him, he is simply not sincere and is unworthy. Other attributes are secondary. There can be no lasting relation with an insincere and unreliable person irrespective of any amount of other qualities. This is an intelligent and useful poll.
We often see the same names on the site. The reasons is simple. There are some members very active and they visit the site daily or more often. It is natural that we come across their names more frequently. There are many who visit casually once in a blue moon. Naturally, we are unlikely to see their name on the site. This is an intelligent and useful poll.
!7-21 is young adult. If I were to remain in same age the entire life, no age would be better. Young adult is best for play, best for work and best for learning. In fact, this is best for everything. Being younger means whole life dependency. This is the best age for romance and erotic experiences as well. This is very enjoyable and imaginative poll.
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