It is wisely said- Let bygones be bygones. We have no control on past. It is no use crying over split milk. But it is easier said than done. everyone repents some times in his life. So the poll is on a very personal sensitive matter. It also points to the necessity of planning our actons well if necessary by taking expert advice so that we may not have to regret later. The author has done well by initiating poll on the matter.
vegetarianism is gaining popularity. Most people turn vegetarian for the reason of avoiding cruelty to animals. There are many who consider vegetarian food good for health. Actually, the health factor needs medical opinion. We should not ignore the fact that food for men and animals and even plants comes from living bodies only. even the plantations have lives. In fact, eating potatoes and eggs is same. The pain of the plants and trees is not visible felt. Nevertheless, eating animal flesh and vegetables is equally crfuel. The author has done a good job by highlighting the matter through the poll.
Christ was an embodiment of love, compassion and sacrifice. He played a great part i humanising the human society. He taught us to as true human beings. Love, mercy and service to humanity are his very valuable messages. the Christians believe him to be son of God. Whatever be the difference of opinion, his historic role is indeniable. The Poll is good device to maake people give a thought about the incomparable personality of Jesus.
The poll is on a very good topic. It is a glaring fact that most individuals believe blindly in the faith and beliefs of the religious community they belong to by birth. There is hardly any one who chooses a religion by conviction. The poll poses a thought provoking question. It is a good poll.
I understand that the options refer to time zones. so the idea of the poll appears to be to fin out time zone wise composition of the participants in the writing.com. However I fail to understand how this poll is relevant to personality or personality test.
The importance of good hardware can hardly be over emphasized. the author has done well by this poll to find out how users care about their computer. Key Board and mouse are significant devices to give output to the computer. The author's attempt is commendable.
It is a good exercise to assess readers interests. The response to the poll will be helpful in promoting the journal by considering the readers' interest.
English is considered as international language. Undoubtedly, English is playing a vital role in international education, trade, tourism and contact. The poll is a good exercise to know the percentage of English speaking people, even if it is not their first language or mother tongue. As expected, greater percentage of English speaking population is in American continent.
Today's world is a big global village. International trade, communication, tourism, cultural exchange have changed the shape of world. Now no body can seriously claim that he can remain aloof from what happens in countries other than his own. The Poll is a very good attempt to understand the public view of internationalism.
It is a very interesting poem beautifully depicting the consequences of blind jealousy and hatred. The poem is in first peson. The poet is full of hatred for the guy who is to grab his love. He kills the girl' brother by mistake and he can only repent and do nothing except count cars. The guy of whom he got jealous has got what he wanted.
The poet likens heart to a caged bird. Obviously, the cage is nothing but human body. The poet has used many metaphors to describe heart. It appears that he actually means soul which is caged in human body. He says that one day the bird will be freed. It means that on death of the human body, soul (heart) will be freed. It is a philosophical poem. Exact meaning can be only guessed but the poet alone knows the true meaning. On the whoile, the poem is fine and well worded.
I found the reviewing guidelines test very helpful. It has helped me in making future reviews. I feel that every one indulging in review of articles, poems and other items should familiarize himself with the reviewing technique and go through the test so that he may do justice to the job.
It is a very beautiful well composed poem. The poet gets a glimpse of a middle aged woman while watering the plants. The woman is lonely.and sad. The poet depicts very nicely the mindset of the woman. The poet prays for her. The style of the poem is very pleasing. It is a pleasure to read it.
It is a short poem fantasizing beauty of poet's beloved and the warmth of her kiss. The poem is very romantic and he is so passionate that he wishes the dream should never end. He has used metaphor very impressively. His choice of suitable words is indeed remarkable.
Isleen is a little fairy. She was taken away by Haru. Isleen chose to live with humans. Moonmmist missed Isleen. she was not happy to part company but she consoled herself as Isleen herself chosen to live with humans. Isleen is very naive about human ways and nature. Haru trained her in wearing dress. She was so naive that she could not understand why Haru blushed while helping her to wear under garments like Bra. Haru even helped her in shampooing andcombing. He explained that he was making hair better. The story is narrated by Moonmis, Haru aned Isleen. The narration by Isleen is most interesting. The story is very interesting from begining to end.
The author has made a good attempt to analyze causes of terrorism and the motivation behind such activities. the author has viewed that the terrorists are uneducated lot and are full of hatred and enmity towards mankind.
The author has, however, missed a point. The terrorists are not so uneducated. They are educated but misguided and have an exaggerated view of superiority of their own religion and they view their activities as a holy crusade. It is the intolerance, orthodoxy and fundamentalism that gives rise to terrorism.
However the author has made a very commendable effort to write the piece on terrorism.
The poet is reluctant to pray to God for his forgiveness and he does not want to bother him. It is like a guilty person hiding himself. He feels that he is too arrogant to bother God. He feels god may be too busy with helping others and so should not bother him.
The poet also is aware of kindness of God towards those who seek him. Yet, he is reluctant to bother him. The poet is actually guilt conscious and he believes his misdeeds cannot be forgiven. In fact, he toof cannot forgive himself. The pastor at church advised the poet to bury all his transgressions and seek God's forgiveness.
Ultimately the poet gives in and he decides to bother God.
The poem is well written. It is a good portrayal of a guilty man ashamed of himself and reluctant to face God initially but ultimately giving in and picking up courage to seek Him.
It is utmost important to promote a web site for its effectiveness. Unless great number of net users join and actively participate, the site cannot give good results. The item 'help us to help you' gives very good guide lines to writing com members to promote the site. It rightly suggests that each member of writing com spread the message to others. It is a good suggestion that the members visit writing sites and promote writing.com there.
But I have one doubt. Other writing sites are competitor to writing.com and they may not take kindly to promoting ourselves on their sites. This needs elucidation.
The author has made smoking cigarette theme of his poem. cigarette is the devil he cannot get rid of. He laments that the devil in shape of cigarette is his constant companion. Though sure that the devilish cigarette is the slow killer, the poet is unable to quit it because it never goes out of his mind. The poet has very nicely worded his interesting poem.
The poem is written in first person. The author suffers from insomnia.
Unable to sleep because he is ever repenting for what he has become. In the first stanza, he speaks of his untruths, misdeeds that made him the person he hates. He has lost all hope. He has contradictions within him. He has a strong will but also inactive as he is constantly reminded of his misdeeds. He calls himself a fool who had great potential but everything is lost. He is unable to let bygones be bygones and begin life on a new leaf.
The poem is rhyming and interesting.
It is a beautiful poem expressing optimism of girl that she can face any attack. She has protection of her mother. But the mother is also not strong enough. The girl has courage and and will face anything even when her mother is no more. She says- "God knows my faith strong. And I keep a sharp butcher knife." It is well written- "Life is not for the meek' It is a good message.
The poem is interesting and it is pleasure to read. However, the rhyming scheme is not uniform. The rhyming pattern changes from stanza to stanza.
We seldom find poems on office routine. The poet has selected a rare topic. It is about an office employee who merely goes by routine and plays no role in planning for better functioning. He is just a file pusher and he passes his day by fixing dates with concurrence of his boss. The line - But balanced on my shoulders Is the science of pushing paper' Thus pushing paper has been converted into a fine art. In fact, the poem is a beautiful satire on bureaucratic functioning.
The author narrates his strange experience in the house his parents inherited. They shifted to the house and made certain alterations. Strange things started happening. The lights turned on and off by themselves. The water tap turned itself off without any human intervention. The author, his parents and siblings all also heard strange voices. The worst experience was the shadows and outlines of humans and animals.
One day, the author saw a large black cat in his room. The cat vanished. One day, author's sister was pushed down the stairs by an invisible force.
The entire family was perturbed by these strange incidents that clearly pointed to ghosts living in the house. Author's parents began researching ghosts on the internet. They came across a local group that they quickly called for investigation. The investigators found some interesting things. The first thing was an E.V.P. or Electronic Voice Phenomenon. As the selected section played back a voice of a man issued from the laptop’s speakers. It was saying, “This is my house, get out. Get out!”
Another strange voice came across the speakers, this time it was a young girl. “Mommy?” it asked. They saw a clip of a young girl at the foot of author's bed. The girl was dressed in Victorian clothing and had in her arms a cat, a black cat with brilliant green eyes. The author recollected having seen the same cat.
The investigators left. The author, his parents and siblings wondered how the things they experienced could be. They wondered why the persons and animals that they saw were still in the house. The only satisfaction was that the strange persons and animals like cat were not disturbing them and they would not be thrown out of the house.
The author has well narrated the story of the haunted house. It is very interesting.
It is a wonderful poem. The poem testifies to the fact that healthy mind lives in a healthy body. As the body is sick and full of pain, poet's mind is full of despair and agony. However, he picks hope as he has a friend. He opens the window and breathes air. It appears to him that
friend is standing near the window. The gloom gives room to smile. The poet hopes wondrous things to come. Who is poet's friend. It may be the almighty or his own self confidence.
The poem is well worded. The last word of the line rhyme.
It is an interesting story of internet friendship. The author met a girl online. Both share each others' problems and even suggest way out. The author when in difficult position goes on computer and chats with the girl.
The internet chat had begun in routine manner. Both just told each other their age, likings etc. Gradually, they began sharing their personal matters. .
The author was career oriented. He was working on a project, which would on its success give a boost to the author's career. He would be elevated to partnership. The author was engaged to a girl. He would devote most of his time to project and the fiancee was upset with this. She felt that the author was too occupied with career and did not care about her. Ultimately the author succeeded in his career but the fiancee broke the engagement by throwing away the engagement ring.
The author was upset and and so he went online for a chat with his internet friend. His friend was offline. So he sent her a lengthy Email.
They decide3d to meet personally in a library. They had never seen each other. So they decided to carry yellow l flowers with themselves. The author waited for his internet friend till a considerably long period. But she did not turn up. Disappointed he went home After some time, someone knocked at the door. The author feared some burglar with knife standing outside. He opened the door. His internet friend was there. She had missed his address. With difficulty, she managed to reach him. She had yellow flowers with her.
The story is well worded and is interesting from beginning till end. He has very well shown how the author could not carry on with her real life fiancee but could be so intimate on the internet.
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