Hey its all good with me. I'm not a devout religious person myself, but do believe in a higher 'being', as us being all connected. The Bible is the only book I've found where two people at opposite ends of the spectrum can read the exact same verse and get two completely different takes to back up their ignorant arguments.
That was good. You set the place very well. A bit more description of the creature may have helped, cause I got a bit cofused abut its looks. Overall great stuff. Keep it up
Pretty good work. My suggestion would be to add a bit more description to his being yanked out of the car. There would be mor epeople reacting, especially his co-workers. Keep it up
Very good work, quite believable. Naming a fallen angel, even the most obscure one, would have enhanced the truthfulness to it would be my only suggestions. Great work, keep it up.
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