Ooo, that was intriguing. That is old style mystery right there. I read the whole thing when I didn't actually plan on doing just that. I very much enjoyed this. The only thing that distracted me in the story was a lot of repeated words, like dame and things of that nature, but I understand that it was a part of the overall old style writing that the entry portrayed. Nice work.
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