i totally relate to this and love the way you captured exacly how i felt the day i reliezed that i really was okay, that i could smile again wihout reminding myself to. And you flow with the words are beautiful... thank you so much for sharing
So i liked the story itself, a nice plot and so forth but toward the end i kind of got a little lost. i think maybe you rushed at the end, as though you just wanted to finish but like i said it is a good story and i would like to check out a few more... Thanks for sharing
Ginny
i loved the passion in this poem, as though you really cried for what our heavenly father scarifies for us.... beautiful flow of words and nice rhythm.
Ginny.
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