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Review of The Moon  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great twist. My only correction is that you wrote "shoulder to should" Write on, and happy holidays
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (5.0)
Not so good with words on the fly, so I'll just say: good poem, good messedge, good job. Keep it up!
Happy Holidays
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Good one; I love crazy people :) only thing I would suggest is build into the madness slower. And you wrote "I will" twice at the end.
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Review of " Anna's Dolls"  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.5)
i HATE dolls, which is why I loved this. good poem/story
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Review of Grave Robber  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good story. All I can say; I'm tired.
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great story. I love how you altered the writing to hpw they would talk; many people turn their character's into robots when it comes to grammer. Keep writing stories like this :)
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Review of Division  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good poem. Made me think of my grandmother when she died and how I missed her last moments and words. Sorry if I missd the point, I'm cold and tired lol.
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great story! It read like poetry in my head and I refused to look away till it was finished. Great job Annabel
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Review of The Unseen Man  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this story. I don't know what smartsy thing I could say about, so I'm just saying I loved it; good job
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