Normally I'm not really interested in this sort of thing or Genra. Way to girly from what I can tell. But, the fan fics are more interesting for me to attempt. I've yet to rear this very interactive but Past Sins does seem appropriatelly done and I'm sure this sequel(in a sense) will ve equally good as an interactive worthy of it's ratings if the chapters in such a short time span is anything to go bye.
This is a delightful surprise compared to what I was begining to think all 18+ Furry based stories are. At first I thought this might be another erotica that's only about se without much story, but from what I read in the first story line it's nice to know there may be more stories and plots than pointless sex chapters that fail to get back to the real story.
I'm not quite sure how to describe how I feel about this interactive. Nice freedom with good starts on the storylines. However, I do think that Malfore(may have misspelled) was made excessively cruel. Not that I could do much better until I add story chapters. All in all though the stories are pretty darn good with descriptions and details.:)
Great story lines. At 18+ I'd expect more sexual adds that would ruin the story, because most I've seen with that high a rating mostly had sexual content. But, I'm pleasantly surprised people made sure to make entertaining stories :)
All, if not almost all, of the chapters are written phenomenally well and could make great stories (especially if you can chain the stories of each world together) and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading. Now that I FINALLY got an account here I hope to add a few good chapters too and get support for any interactives I make also.
Bravo! Well done. In your works I have seen very little to no flaws :) You got a well constructed plot and I am certain it will become a popular book. Immediately I've only read a few storylines on realm drifter, but so far yours is the best interactive I've seen as an actual story for each chapter.
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